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Wednesday 18 October 2017

Te Manu Tukutuku poem

Te Manu Tukutuku poem

I hear kids cheering, going on in the hall like the super rugby final but it’s for kiwican .

I watch kids playing on the basketball court.

The scent of the brand new refreshing furniture is grate.

I touch the glossy, cool whiteboard tables.

I feel great because I was one of kids at the new school.
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  1. Anonymous8 November 2017 at 11:55

    Hi Sam Nici Here
    I really like how you said that the whiteboard tables were glossy. Maybe next time you could make the sentences the school colours if you want to change the colours.
    How did you get a very light color?

    Love to hear back
    Blog you later
    Nici

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    1. Anonymous8 November 2017 at 11:58

      i will change the color of the text to black and thank you for your comment nici.

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