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Tuesday 10 May 2016

My Many Coloured Days Poem



Mrs McGuinniety read us the Dr. Seuss story. Many Coloured Days . I wrote a colour and feeling poem.
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  1. Anonymous24 November 2016 at 08:46

    Awesome Sam! I like the similes you used. But you missed a gap between am and grey. But it happens. I really think you connect to some of my emotions. Great work!

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