Introduction
Hook / questions (no more than 3) Are you just looking for that final touch? When or if you are in sticky situations it would help you.
Introduce your stick - What you are selling
I offer you this amazing wond is waiting for you and Are you just looking for that final touch?
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Elaborate, explain or give evidence
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Main Point
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Helpful tool
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Main Point
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Save you
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Main Point
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Keep you company
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Conclusion
Sum up what you have been talking about
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Are you just looking for that final touch?
I offer you this amazing wand is waiting for you. Are you just looking for that final touch?
Firstly it can be a helpful tool When you are in sticky situations. You can use this amazing wand as cutlery when your silverware is dirty. You can also use it as a marshmallow holder when you are roasting a marshmallow over a fire. So you don’t burn your fingers.
Secondly It can save you If u get stuck in a fire your wand would put it out because you can cast a spell to put it out
Thirdly it would keep you company if you are scared of Earthquakes. You have came to the right place to get a wand to as your toy to sleep with you. And it look over you when you are scared. Your wand will hug you with it’s heart.
Stocks are going fast so you can get one just for you before they run out. So go to the nearest wand shop today.
We have bean learning how to write persuasive piece of writing. we had to convince Miss guinniety to sell a stick
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